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Reviewer: Skyrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2009 9:30:11 PM Title: A Tangled Web

This chapter was very amusing!
Kenchy, who I remember wallowing in self-pity at Bailey's the day Emily was supposed to be married, as a matchmaker is so funny! I enjoyed how you poked fun at Emily and Jake's relationship. And how when you got to the part about Kenchy trying to find a match for Bill that you interjected Bills thoughts in the middle of what Kenchy was saying. I'm left wondering if Emily and Kenchy end up together and whether or not Kenchy will ever find a suitable mate for Bill.

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Jake's jaw clenched automatically.  "I'm not lookin' for a date," he repeated.  "And, if you're thinkin' of dating Emily, just be careful," he advised, blatantly changing the subject.  "My advice: avoid actual conversation, though I didn't know sports was such a touchy subject.  Used to just be the weather, politics, religion, grades, music and Keanu Reeves."  Kenchy's eyebrows rose.  "Don't ask," Jake grumbled.
So funny. I can easily see how you made the leap in Emily's character here.

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"I already failed once," Kenchy argued.  "But that was Beck, and he's insane and nobody likes him.  The Terrestrial Mentalists can have him, no loss.  But people like Bill."
So funny!

Reviewer: SandraDee Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2009 10:38:28 PM Title: A Tangled Web

Very amusing chapter!  I especially liked the confusion over just how many times Jake and Emily had broken up.  Too funny.

I also liked the addition of Kenchy to the story.  Jake needed a sounding board, and since Mary's now confined to the commune, what better ear? 

The matchmaking aspect of Kenchy's business was also hilarious to me, particularly the efforts to pair up "lone wolf" Bill with a suitable mate.  LOL.  What a catch. ;)

Looking forward to seeing where Deputy Bill takes us next. :)

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