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Reviewer: Skyrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2009 7:46:04 PM Title: Misdirection Mambo

Reading this chapter was like watching a film noir with Mimi as the femme fatale - the part below especially made it feel like one to me.
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"No, it's...good," I said, watching her stand up to her full height. I'd only met Mimi Clark a few times before, and in fact, we'd never actually been formally introduced. I knew she was an attractive lady, but I'd never taken time to really consider her. I'm not sure why, I just always felt an instinct in the back of my mind that it would be better not to spend a lot of time thinking about Mimi Clark. Now, it was impossible not to look at her, and she filled my thoughts so that I could barely remember why I'd come in the first place. Her legs went on forever and those designer trousers clung in all the right places. She moved her hips like she knew they had the power to drive me wild, and she laid her hand on her heaving chest so casually, as if she didn't know I was imagining my own hand against her moist skin. I tried to remember again if I had come there for any reason other than to take in the delicious sight of Mimi Clark. The barn...the warrant.

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"I wanted a job where I could work for the town and I failed a fire drill once in high school. I ducked and covered instead of evacuating. I - I panicked," I choked out, "and the fire chief wouldn't hire me after that." Her face was inches from mine, her eyes boring into me, and I wondered if actual steam was issuing from my ears. She laughed again, and licked her lips. "That's sooooo interesting," she crooned.
So funny - Bill's story and Mimi the classic femme fatale.

Reviewer: SandraDee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2009 6:22:26 PM Title: Misdirection Mambo

Oh my!  Too funny!  It looks as though Bill is in over his head.

I think my favorite line had to be this one:

She nodded, gripping my hand tighter in both of hers. "Why don't you come in for some lemonade? Or some Tang?"

Hilarious!

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