You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:25:38 PM Title: Part 14C

I like the idea of placing Michael instead of Jake with Maggie! And Michael seems smitten... poor guy will not like what he will learn, soon... :(

 

And Heather's family is just awesome... *laughs*

I love being able to stick my beak into those family moments! :)

And it looks like that Jake is at least winning Joe over... the girls he has already on his side... now we need to see what Heather's brothers have to say! ;)

Reviewer: merryann Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 5:08:10 PM Title: Part 14C

Oh, and you left us with a cliffhanger!

Loved hearing about the Lisinski family's early years.  I'm glad they like Jake!

Looking forward to more installments!!

Reviewer: EMT481 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:32:03 PM Title: Part 14C

I have just recently started watching the Jericho series and I instantly fell in love with it. I love to read so i looked up some Jericho fanfiction and instantly became a heather/jake fan. I have to tell you though this work of art that you have produced in my opinion dwarfs the original idea in its brilliance. 

 

Your advancement of the plot and following the actual show is amazing, as is the changes in the original plot to allow the relationship between heather and jake to change. I must give you kudos and say that if you ever publish something of your own let me know. I would enjoy reading it.

Reviewer: SandraDee Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 10:38:42 PM Title: Part 14C

Another wonderful chapter, Marzee Doats!  I read it shortly after it was posted and wanted to write a review then, but time limitations prohibited me from doing so at that time...and then things got busier.  So sorry it's taken so long to tell you what a jewel this was!

I loved your take on the faux Marines.  I thought this storyline had some nice touches, from Gray scrambling to get supplies for them, weighing the costs and benefits, to the chemistry that popped off the screen between Maggie and Michael.  I found myself wishing that Maggie would give up the charade and stay there with him, but I am looking forward to (perhaps) seeing her again in New Bern and after.  I'll enjoy seeing where you take these two in the future.

And Jake and Heather in Buffalo... yeah, I knew the Lisinski siblings weren't going to make it easy for their only sister.  There were so many parts that brought a smile to my face, from the Lisinski Home for Wayward boys to "engaged's not married." I thought Jake handled himself well with Joe, though having knowledge of what's to come (and knowing that his work does take him away from Heather eventually) does add an extra layer of interest when reading those scenes.  It's fascinating to read how the character perceive their lives will be and compare that to what we know did/does happen.

I also enjoyed what you did with the Optimus Prime references.  It also made me laugh and smile.

Thank you so much for such an enjoyable installment.  Your combination of wit, heart, and character development always leaves me wanting more.

 

You must login (register) to review.