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Reviewer: SandraDee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2010 1:26:29 PM Title: Return of the Twin

Poor Kenchy!  I remember how traumatized he was after Rogue River and how he'd not wanted to operate on April.  Now to be faced with her doppleganger...yikes. 

I liked how you filled in the gaps, telling Sunday's perspective of the events we saw in the first installment of this story, learning more about her motivations, and how people are reacting to glimpses of April's "ghost."  I'm curious to see what happens with Sunday when she's discovered, as I'm nearly sure she'll eventually be known for who she is. 

Reviewer: Marzee Doats Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2009 7:47:24 PM Title: Return of the Twin

I have to say, getting filled in a bit more on Sunday's life has left me feeling a little sorry for her.  She really is the unlucky twin, isn't she?  Though hearing she used to do customer service for a bus line just makes me glad that it's been more than a decade since I've been on Greyhound!

So I have to say, the thing that amuses me the most in this chapter is the revelation that Kenchy totally lied to Eric, claiming that he'd never seen ghosts when he'd actually seen 'April's' ghost, the very one who was haunting Eric, AND he didn't handle it so well himself.   I've always had a soft spot for Kenchy.  He's got the worst case of PTSD in all of Jericho, so he was ripe to play right into Sunday's hand.  A nifty and totally reasonable bit of deux ex machina. :-)  On the other hand, he pulled that lie off pretty smoothly, giving me hope that he'll be all right in the end. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Marzee!

You're right, Sunday is the unlucky twin, but I guess it's balanced by the fact that everyone that runs across her ends up unlucky too. Especially those poor bus line customers.

You're right, Kenchy totally lied, he's haunted like Eric, and slightly more wary that people won't believe him or will think him traumatized or into the sauce. You're right also that he has the worst case of PTSD in all of Jericho, so I think it's understandable. I have a soft spot for him too, so rest assured he'll be left mostly in one piece.

Thanks again for all your help and for reading!

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