Penname: ShadesOfGreen [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 02 Jul 2008
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Starless Sky Story by Penny Lane Rated: K+ (Some Content May Not be Suitable for Young Children) [Reviews - 5]
Summary:  As Eric and his niece sit up telling stories at home, two other Jericho citizens are far away and wide awake as well.
Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather
Characters: Heather Lisinski, Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.19 - Casus Belli, 1.22 - Why We Fight
Genres: Drama
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5080 Read Count: 13785
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2008 Updated: 26 Jun 2008
Reviewer: ShadesOfGreen Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't believe I missed this both on here and on JFF! That was really, really good. :) I love the addition of Jake and Heather's kids, not only because it means they are together and married, but because their kids give them something/someone to fight for. I like how Jake and Heather are remaining optimisitic (for the most part) that they will get back home to their kids, no matter what.

Do you plan on writing a continuation to this?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the great compliment! You're right- the kids give them something to fight for, and they have to keep thinking this to keep themselves going on this trip gone horribly wrong.

I am working on a possible continuation to this (and it in iteslf is a continuation of my other piece Night Narrative). Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Different Circumstances, Part 12 by Marzee Doats Rated: T (Contains Content Not Suitable for Children) [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

What if circumstances were different, and Jake and Heather had met long before the school bus? An alternate version of Jericho in which Jake and Heather are married and expecting. A re-telling of the Jericho episode Black Jack.


Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather, Holidays > Christmas
Characters: April Green, Bill, Bonnie Richmond, Dale Turner, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Jimmy Taylor, Johnston Green, Roger Hammond, Russell, Skylar Stevens, Stanley Richmond, Ted Lewis
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.13 - Black Jack
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Series: Different Circumstances
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66226 Read Count: 249594
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2008 Updated: 23 Nov 2008
Reviewer: ShadesOfGreen Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Part 12C

Wonderful chapter, Marzee! :) Was absolutely thrilled to see a new chapter posted just when I returned from vacation!

 I love that Jake left the note for Heather to find. It was so sweet and just so Jake. I loved the mushy scene in Jake's room from five years prior. Especially loved that Jake opened the door before Gramps did.

 I love that you brought Mindy back into the story and had her fill the role of the one originally filled by Heather at BlackJack. I knew there had to be a reason you spent so much time focusing on Mindy's relationship with Jake all those chapters ago when you introduced us to her.

 Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one!

 



Author's Response:

 

Shades,

 

Glad my timing is good!  I should have the next part posted very soon, so keep an eye out.  I just couldn't let Gramps get the set of Jake… but then again, I couldn't let Gramps be totally foiled.  (That's why I gave him the cover of the returned shoes.)  :-)

 

As for Mindy, I have to admit that I didn't know she would get to take Heather's place at Black Jack when I introduced her. What I did know was that she didn't live in Jericho anymore, and I wondered where she was because I did want to know how she was doing.   Then it hit me that she could very well be in New Bern and she could very well run into Jake at Black Jack.  2 birds, one stone. ;-) 

 

Thank you for taking the time to review!