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The Greens of Jericho
A Jericho Fan Fiction Archive
Member Since: 30 Oct 2008
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I am a fan-fiction reading junky and I write for the 'ships that burn my soul. I found Jericho just recently and love the idea of Heather and Jake.
I was driven to start a long character based semi-alt fic dealing with H/J and I nearly have the first chapter done. I hope to be allowed to post this fic here. It is titled, 'Miss Lisinski and the Reformed Bad Boy of Jericho'.
I hope to read and review lots of awesome H/J fics.
I can beta, but I work full time and may not get things out quickly if my work load is too heavy.
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Summary: 
Categories: Hawkins Family, Jake/Heather
Characters: Darcy Hawkins, Eric Green, Gail Green, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Mimi Clark, Robert Hawkins, Russell, Stanley Richmond
Episode/Spoilers For: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104511 Read Count: 698687
What if Heather decided to go to Cheyenne instead of returning to Jericho?
Categories: Hawkins Family, Jake/Heather
Characters: Darcy Hawkins, Eric Green, Gail Green, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Mimi Clark, Robert Hawkins, Russell, Stanley Richmond
Episode/Spoilers For: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104511 Read Count: 698687
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2008 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Author's Response:
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
OH! wow! This is a wonderful story.
Favorite part is...
(The truth of the dream's meaning in his subconscious jolted Jake awake. It took another minute for the dream's message to seep into his conscious being.
Once awake, Jake couldn't go back to sleep. His mind was occupied with thoughts of his relationship with Emily. His heart, on the other hand, was full of feelings for Heather.
Jake knew he had to deal with the thoughts in his mind before turning attention to the feelings in his heart.
Tonight, he finally admitted that his relationship with Emily was over. He wasn't able to give her what she wanted, what she seemed to need. She wanted the old Jake back . . . she wanted the same relationship they had before Chris died. She was living in the past while he was looking towards the future. )
Yes, Jake, look to the future! Yipee.
Headed to read more.
Sid
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you're enjoying my story! I really enjoy getting into the character's mind, trying to figure out how they would deal with certain situations. I think that while Jake realized he had feelings for Heather, he couldn't pursue them until he ended his realtionship with Emily. I also think that he realized that with Emily, he'd always being living in the past -being someone he no longer was - and that he needed to look toward the future. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Author's Response:
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Yes! Yes! Yes, this is one very compelling story.
Thanks for sharing.
Sid
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're still enjoying my story! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Author's Response:
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Who'd have thunk it Hawkin's a Jake/Heather shipper, but I can see it happening that way.
Great story I hope she opens up soon the suspense is killing me.
Sid
Author's Response:
I didn't really intend to write Hawkins as a 'matchmaker' but I am having alot of fun with it. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Heather will be opening up soon. You won't have to wait too much longer. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Author's Response:
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Little Jakes...Awwwww! I think it would be poetic if he did only have girls and one was just like him.
Yeah, love this fic bunches and bunches.
Sid
Author's Response:
Sid,
Thanks for reading my story! I really like the thought of Little Jakes (and Little Heathers) running around. You are right it would be poetic if Jake had a daughter that was just like him! Thanks for taking the time to review my story!
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12B
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12B
I love Gray come-upance!
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12B
Author's Response:
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12B
I am loving this and can't wait to read the proposal/nightgown chapter. What a freakin' plot twist for me Joe known Collins.
I can't wait to see season two.
Sid
Author's Response:
I'll try not to keep you waiting too long for the proposal! Yes, Joe does know Collins and more on that as the story goes on. Thanks very much for your review!
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Date: 11 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I really love this story! I guess you shouldn't glut yourself on a bacon cheeseburger with sweet potato fries when you aren't used to real rich food. Either that or Valenti did something to make her sick...Hmmm...Like living and being a perv.
More soon, please.
Sid
Summary: 
Categories: Jake/Heather
Characters: Heather Lisinski, Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.10 - Red Flag
Genres: Romance
Series: Bizarro World
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4911 Read Count: 16820
A possible explanation for Heather's absence from the episode Red Flag. Definitely Jake/Heather. Definintely AU after Vox Populi.
Categories: Jake/Heather
Characters: Heather Lisinski, Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.10 - Red Flag
Genres: Romance
Series: Bizarro World
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4911 Read Count: 16820
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2008 Updated: 08 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Life in Bizarro World
Author's Response:
Date: 02 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Life in Bizarro World
Awe!!!! I love Jake when he is sweet and protective. I just thought this wa a wonderful J/H Universe. Thank you for sharing and I can't wait for more.
Sid
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sid! Hopefully you've discovered that there are 2 sequels to this story now, and Bizarro World is actually its own series. Enjoy!
Summary:
Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather
Characters: Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.01 - Pilot
Genres: Drama
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 129810 Read Count: 1168895
Here is my alternative universe of Jericho. This story is about as AU as they come. Welcome to my world! Jake plus one comes back home.......
Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather
Characters: Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.01 - Pilot
Genres: Drama
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 129810 Read Count: 1168895
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2008 Updated: 13 Oct 2008
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1, The Road Home
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1, The Road Home
Totally the way I'd see him as a dad.
Reading more...
Sid
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I always chose to believe that was all another dream scene in the church. Love this a lot.
Sid
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Oh, I love Jake Green and Skeet Ulrich has a mighty fine chest so...Yeah, thanks for including shirtless Jake.
Sid
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Storm
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Storm
Not sure I see Heather asking that type of question...Now, Emily...Yeah, she'd lie and chatter.
I always just thought Heather would have asked point blank.
Sid
Summary: Following the war with New Bern, Jericho's citizens strive to put their lives back together. However, they soon discover that not everything is as it seems, both within their new government and on the homefront.
Categories: Jake/Heather
Characters: Heather Lisinski, Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.20 - One If By Land, 1.21 - Coalition of the Willing, 1.22 - Why We Fight
Genres: Drama, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 129649 Read Count: 1065733
Following the war with New Bern, Jericho's citizens strive to put their lives back together. However, they soon discover that not everything is as it seems, both within their new government and on the homefront.Categories: Jake/Heather
Characters: Heather Lisinski, Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.20 - One If By Land, 1.21 - Coalition of the Willing, 1.22 - Why We Fight
Genres: Drama, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 129649 Read Count: 1065733
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2008 Updated: 06 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11, Part C
Author's Response:
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11, Part C
Oh, Dangerous, how do I love you? Let me count the ways...
Actually that would take way too long, but I love the way you formed this story. I can see a hopeless Jake falling into Emily's fickle arms if he thinks Heather is dead and he looses his father.
I love the shower scene and the whole bit about them always ending up in the bathroom.
I love John Denver and the dancing scene and I love especially this bit...
(When they’d danced together, he’d had to fight the urge to tuck his thumbs in the waistband and…)
Thank you for writing this and I hope for more soon.
Sid
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sid! The strange thing about the bathroom is that I didn't really plan it that way, but then it occurred to me that they kept running into each other there, so now I guess that's their special room. LOL.
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: 17 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Love these lines...
The flag was wrong.
And blurry.
And black.
That was my first thought...The flag is wrong! It scared the bajeezus out of me seeing that flag. I couldn't believe that people in the military went along so blindly to fight under a flag that was so wrong.
Thanks for this story...I may have already read this and commented on the story, but you there is nothing like ni-quil to put your brain to sleep.
Sid
Author's Response:
Yeah, I remember the first time I saw the ASA flag on my tv screen. I think I must've gasped. Even knowing that the Jericho universe is fictional, the American flag is so engrained into me that to see a different version felt like a perversion. So then that got me to thinking that many people if faced with the reality that the Jericho characters find themselves would be equally apalled.
I've also wondered how the military members would justify carrying a banner different from their own. The only thing I can figure is that with a fractured central government came a fracturing of the military. Soldiers are trained to follow the orders of their C.O.'s, and the chain of command held--sort of.
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12, Part A
Author's Response:
Date: 14 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12, Part A
I love that Gail knows her son well enough to know he is stuck in a rut of allowing himself to be unhappy as though it is all he deserves. I hnave had a boat load, or a chinook load of work this last ten days but this chapter made my shippy heart happy!
I really needed a way to escape real life and your fic is perfect for that!
Thank you for sharing.
Sid
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments, Sid. I thought you brought up an interesting point, which is whether Jake will allow himself to be happy. Is he with Emily because it's the easier thing to do, because he loves her, or is he with her as a way to remain unhappy and therefore, punish himself for all his wrongs? Gail is certainly in an interesting position. She knows Jake better than most, has a vested interest in his happiness, but also knows that he has to make his own decisions. How difficult it must be to remain an oberserver in that situation!
Summary: Trapped in the storage room at Bailey's Tavern, Jake and Heather must confront their feelings for one another.
Categories: Jake/Heather
Characters: Heather Lisinski, Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: Season 1, Season 2
Genres: Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8529 Read Count: 17070
Trapped in the storage room at Bailey's Tavern, Jake and Heather must confront their feelings for one another.Categories: Jake/Heather
Characters: Heather Lisinski, Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: Season 1, Season 2
Genres: Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8529 Read Count: 17070
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2008 Updated: 23 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Newton's Third - complete
Author's Response:
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Newton's Third - complete
I loved this!
I, also, agree with Marzee that instant gratification is sometimes just what the doctor ordered. I haven't seen season 2 but first thing after work tomorrow that bad boy will be in my hot little hands if I have to go to 300 stores to find it.
I only wish we got a little hotter depiction of them pretending to be married.
Sid (staring off into the mist to imagine this)
I hope you don't mind if I add you to my favorite author's list.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments, Sid! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I never actually intended to write this story, but sometimes it's nice to have a short diversion while writing a longer piece. Sometimes I toy with the idea of going back and writing some of the events I alluded to in this story but didn't tell in detail (like the time Jake and Heather had in Cheyenne as a pseudo married couple). Alas, real life time limits have prevented me from doing that just yet. Maybe some day...
And of course I don't mind if you add me to your authors list. I'm very honored! :)
Thank you again! And good luck on your quest for season 2!
Starless Sky Story by Penny Lane Rated: K+ (Some Content May Not be Suitable for Young Children) [Reviews - 5]
Summary: As Eric and his niece sit up telling stories at home, two other Jericho citizens are far away and wide awake as well.
Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather
Characters: Heather Lisinski, Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.19 - Casus Belli, 1.22 - Why We Fight
Genres: Drama
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5080 Read Count: 14360
Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather
Characters: Heather Lisinski, Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.19 - Casus Belli, 1.22 - Why We Fight
Genres: Drama
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5080 Read Count: 14360
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2008 Updated: 26 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh, so sweet! I know they get home. thanks for sharing.
Sid
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I'm still working on a possible follow-up to this piece, so hopefully you'll get to see them come home (or not) one day.
Thanks for reading and commenting! :)
Different Circumstances, Part 12 by Marzee Doats Rated: T (Contains Content Not Suitable for Children) [Reviews - 39]
Summary:
Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather, Holidays > Christmas
Characters: April Green, Bill, Bonnie Richmond, Dale Turner, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Jimmy Taylor, Johnston Green, Roger Hammond, Russell, Skylar Stevens, Stanley Richmond, Ted Lewis
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.13 - Black Jack
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Series: Different Circumstances
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66226 Read Count: 254956
What if circumstances were different, and Jake and Heather had met long before the school bus? An alternate version of Jericho in which Jake and Heather are married and expecting. A re-telling of the Jericho episode Black Jack.
Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather, Holidays > Christmas
Characters: April Green, Bill, Bonnie Richmond, Dale Turner, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Jimmy Taylor, Johnston Green, Roger Hammond, Russell, Skylar Stevens, Stanley Richmond, Ted Lewis
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.13 - Black Jack
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Series: Different Circumstances
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66226 Read Count: 254956
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2008 Updated: 23 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Part 12B
Author's Response:
Date: 01 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Part 12B
Okay been reading this without the desire to stop since I discovered it and I just want to say that I love the way you have woven the past and present into such a compelling alternate universe.
The story is well thought out and excellently written. I wasn't sure how I would like the story without the original charcter connections, but I really have fallen in love with this 'verse of Greens.
Thank you for sharing.
Sid
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Sid! I'm glad that you can accept my changes to canon and hope that you can see them as supplemental to the show rather than clashing. It's gratifying to hear that you love my little universe. :-)
Summary:
Categories: General
Characters: April Green, Bill, Bonnie Richmond, Dale Turner, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Jimmy Taylor, Mary Bailey, Mimi Clark, Sean Henthorn, Skylar Stevens, Stanley Richmond
Episode/Spoilers For: Season 1, Season 2
Genres: Drama
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29853 Read Count: 439145
A dark and lonely road, a vehicular crash, a world he'd never dreamt of.
Categories: General
Characters: April Green, Bill, Bonnie Richmond, Dale Turner, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Jimmy Taylor, Mary Bailey, Mimi Clark, Sean Henthorn, Skylar Stevens, Stanley Richmond
Episode/Spoilers For: Season 1, Season 2
Genres: Drama
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29853 Read Count: 439145
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2008 Updated: 21 Jan 2009
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part One: In Dreams They Came
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part One: In Dreams They Came
Wow! Wonderful, if frightening concept! I can't wait to read more.
Sid
Author's Response:
Thanks! I enjoyed taking a darker look at things with this story.
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Part Five: Stranger on the Door Step
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Part Five: Stranger on the Door Step
OMG! Achingly sad and heartbreakingly true! I can't wait for more of this fic.
Thanks for sharing!
Sid
Author's Response:
Thank you, Obsidianagirl!
Thank you for reading, and for your kind words.
And welcome to the site! I hope you have fun here!
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Part Six: Leader of the Pack
Author's Response:
Date: 14 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Part Six: Leader of the Pack
I love the way you wrote this...I can't wait for more.
Thanks for sharing.
Sid
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I've had fun writing this, and I so appreciate your words of encouragement.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Part Nine: Hell Breaks Loose
Author's Response:
Date: 14 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Part Nine: Hell Breaks Loose
Wow! I have really loved this story and was heartbroken that Heather was so badly used and then killed. I liked this angsty story line and hope there is more to come.
Sid
Author's Response:
Thank you!
There is more to come, and thanks for reading so far!
Ghost Town by Marzee Doats, Penny Lane Rated: K+ (Some Content May Not be Suitable for Young Children) [Reviews - 4]
Summary:
Categories: Holidays > Halloween
Characters: Allison Hawkins, April Green, Bill, Bonnie Richmond, Chavez, Dale Turner, Darcy Hawkins, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gracie Leigh, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Jimmy Taylor, John Goetz, Johnston Green, Jonah Prowse, Kenchy Dhuwalia, Maggie Mullin, Major Edward Beck, Mary Bailey, Mimi Clark, Phil Constantino, Robert Hawkins, Roger Hammond, Russell, Sam Hawkins, Sean Henthorn, Skylar Stevens, Stanley Richmond, Ted Lewis, Trish Merrick
Episode/Spoilers For: Season 1, Season 2
Genres: Alternate Universe, Humor
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3714 Read Count: 15247
On Halloween, two historians visit Jericho.
Categories: Holidays > Halloween
Characters: Allison Hawkins, April Green, Bill, Bonnie Richmond, Chavez, Dale Turner, Darcy Hawkins, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gracie Leigh, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Jimmy Taylor, John Goetz, Johnston Green, Jonah Prowse, Kenchy Dhuwalia, Maggie Mullin, Major Edward Beck, Mary Bailey, Mimi Clark, Phil Constantino, Robert Hawkins, Roger Hammond, Russell, Sam Hawkins, Sean Henthorn, Skylar Stevens, Stanley Richmond, Ted Lewis, Trish Merrick
Episode/Spoilers For: Season 1, Season 2
Genres: Alternate Universe, Humor
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3714 Read Count: 15247
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2008 Updated: 18 Oct 2008
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Ghost Town
Author's Response:
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Ghost Town
Attempted a Surprise Reunion With His Daughter The Day She Chose to Touch Up Her Roots He Suffocated Amidst the Peroxide Fumes
This is my favorite one...I always did wonder how she went weeks and weeks without needing her roots touched up...Loved all of these.
Thanks for sharing.
Sid
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sid!
Would you believe that Emily's and Jonah's were some of the first epitaphs we came up with? Some things are just too obvious -- and so in need of explanation -- I guess. :-D
-- Marzee
A Tradition by SandraDee Rated: K+ (Some Content May Not be Suitable for Young Children) [Reviews - 11]
Summary:
Categories: Jake/Heather, Holidays > Halloween
Characters: Heather Lisinski, Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: Season 1, Season 2
Genres: Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15122 Read Count: 70784
A new tradition begins for two of Jericho's citizens.
Categories: Jake/Heather, Holidays > Halloween
Characters: Heather Lisinski, Jake Green
Episode/Spoilers For: Season 1, Season 2
Genres: Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15122 Read Count: 70784
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2008 Updated: 30 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: A Tradition Begins
Author's Response:
Date: 30 Oct 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: A Tradition Begins
I fell hard for these two from episode one. She is what he deserves and needs.
Heather gives Jake unconditional respect and the look in her eyes speaks of her pride in him. Jake needs someone that sees the man he has become not the boy he used to be. I hope you plab to finish this story because it was wonderfully delivered.
Thank you for sharing!
Sid
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and commenting, Sid! I appreciate it!
Like you, I think Heather looks at Jake and sees the man he is now--the man who is selfless, cares more for others than for himself. She does give him unconditional respect, which cannot be said for everyone. She brings out the best in him, and in some ways, I think he's brought out the best in her by making her more confident in her abilities.
Don't worry! I do plan to finish the story. It's just going to be a three-parter. The second part is already completed, and the third is a good portion of the way there.
Thank you again! And welcome to the site, by the way!
Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2: A Tradition Continues
Author's Response:
Date: 09 Nov 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2: A Tradition Continues
Wonderful...It has the air of something that will make my shippy heart go pitter-pat when it is complete...PLEASE, please don't leave me hanging for long. I love that you are dealing with the canon...Braver than I am...I tend to block out things that upset me.
I hope it works out soon...If you need a beta I'm here...I know I am new, but will work for fic.
;o) Sid
Author's Response:
Awww...thank you, Sid! I hope the third part will be satisfying to you. I do have it written; right now I'm just tweaking a couple of things, so you shouldn't be left hanging for too long.
As for dealing with canon, it definitely has its limitations. On the other hand, writing this lets me address some of the things that I found bothersome with the second season, so in that respect, it's all works out for me. Granted, the third and final part of this story will not be canon as it--you guessed it--goes another year in the future to well beyond the end of the show.
Thank you again for your comments. :)