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Once Removed by Penny Lane Rated: T (Contains Content Not Suitable for Children) [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

A dark and lonely road, a vehicular crash, a world he'd never dreamt of.


Categories: General
Characters: April Green, Bill, Bonnie Richmond, Dale Turner, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Jimmy Taylor, Mary Bailey, Mimi Clark, Sean Henthorn, Skylar Stevens, Stanley Richmond
Episode/Spoilers For: Season 1, Season 2
Genres: Drama
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29853 Read Count: 437339
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2008 Updated: 21 Jan 2009
Reviewer: alba Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Part Nine: Hell Breaks Loose

wooooooooooooooow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this chapter has been amazing. It looks like the end of this story, but I think you still could do something more with this story, let us know what happens next, when Jake is taken into town to the med center.I really enjoyed this part it was so intense. I was holding my breath all the time. sobbing at heather dead, at Eric's desperation at Gail´s crying over heather's body, proud of Skylar still wanting to fight and I still was thinking that it was better not to fight at the moment, not like that, where everybody was gonna get killed but understanding all the rage the people from jericho had. I don't know what else to say just wooooooooooow!!!!!!!! you've done a great job with this story. please keep bringing more. :)

Date: 13 Dec 2008 5:03:06 AM [Delete]


Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm glad the intensity of this chapter worked for you, and rest assured, it is not the end yet!

 

The Survival Season by Penny Lane, Marzee Doats Rated: T (Contains Content Not Suitable for Children) [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

The world ended. Their time was just beginning.


Categories: General
Characters: Allison Hawkins, April Green, Bill, Bonnie Richmond, Dale Turner, Darcy Hawkins, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, John Goetz, Kenchy Dhuwalia, Major Edward Beck, Mary Bailey, Mimi Clark, Robert Hawkins, Sam Hawkins, Skylar Stevens, Stanley Richmond, Trish Merrick
Episode/Spoilers For: Season 2
Genres: Parody/Satire
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70614 Read Count: 549645
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2009 Updated: 16 May 2012
Reviewer: alba Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Prologue

Well after reading it all again there are so many questions. I'm sure you would go on in those question as the story progress but I will ask anyway.

Mimi shook her head again, hoping the blond would take the hint and take off. Her mind was already racing through strategies and next steps she would take on her mission, and she couldn't wait to be alone with her love again. Mission? Next steps? I'm all ears.

Very funny all the situation with Dale and Skylar. But I'm intrigued too DD? And why is Dale in Jail?

Mary sighed against him, but then leaned back to shake her head. “I know, but we should just be glad she's safe. And the baby.” All right, who is she in who is the baby????

“What do you say we go check on them now?” she asked.

He nodded. “We have a lot to tell them.” Jesus!!!!!!!!!!!! who are they go to check on, what they have to tell? I¡m biting my nails now in anticipation.

 

He glanced at her again. “I know,” he whispered. He reached with a trembling hand and laid the heel of his palm against her cheek. Staring up at him, she reached her hand up and held it against his, steadying his whole arm with her touch. OK that was really really weird and  intimate don't you think? shudering right now. I don't like Gray sorry I had to tell.

Bill laughed at his friend's earnest suggestions. “Nah, this lone wolf's not ready to settle yet. Not when I've got so many -” So many what? sorry a chuckle is coming right now ( I hope I spell right the word chuckle)

The thought of the pregnancy test inside it was only one of many thoughts swirling around in her head, making her dizzy. The one that seemed to be dominating, repeating over and over, was one sentence, one wish.

Heather is Pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what an ending!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Great story I can't wait to see more, I've got the feeling that I'm gonna love this story. :)




Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad I was able to provoke some questions for you. All shall be answered in good time. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: alba Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2009 Title: Chapter 2: An Unexpected Blessing

LMAO!!! I totally can understand Jake, I feel his pain. Now just prying that Penny Lane got some sense and decide next chapter that it was a dream Gray had. Jajajaja.

And eric with two wifes, woow, that's something I can tell that.

Good work, I like it. now going to read next chapter hoping to see that it was all a dream. :)

Reviewer: alba Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2009 Title: Chapter 3: When Worlds Collide

JAJAJAJA. happy april fool to you too. looking forward to the next chapter.

Roll of the Dice by AveryB, SandraDee Rated: T (Contains Content Not Suitable for Children) [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

When Jake Green is taken prisoner by Major Beck, he relives some of the choices of his past and tries to find the strength to tackle what is to come. A companion piece to the season two epsiode "Sedition."


Categories: Jake/Heather
Characters: None
Episode/Spoilers For: 2.06 - Sedition
Genres: Drama
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13086 Read Count: 83285
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2009 Updated: 01 May 2010
Reviewer: alba Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

when are you going to continue with this story.... come on, you can leave us like this. pleaaaaaaaaase



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment, alba.  I am sorry for taking so long to update and for taking so long to reply to your review.  Sandra Dee and I are working on it.  I promise. :D

Reviewer: alba Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Part 3

yeah!!!!!!!!!!!1 finally I loved it. poor heather, this part is really good. Please bring more. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, alba.  I'm really glad you enjoyed it.  I can't take credit for this part, though.  We brainstormed together, but it has SandraDee written all over it. :D 

Compass by wittlewawa Rated: K (Suitable for Most Ages) [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

This story takes place directly after the military occupation. The story will not follow canon, but I will be trying to keep with the characters as much as possible.


Categories: Jake/Heather
Characters: Eric Green
Episode/Spoilers For: None
Genres: Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 824 Read Count: 13292
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: alba Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start, want more :)