The Greens of Jericho

Very nice!  I have enjoyed your story, but I can't believe we don't get to find out if the new baby will be a boy or girl!  Or how they get rid of martial law. Any plans to continue the story??

Hi Sherry! I read this story awhile back, but I'm revisiting it. 

First off, I love the idea of Jake with a child.  I'm just sooooo grateful that Jacob was not the product of Jake and Emily.  I think I would've had a difficult time stomaching that.  I'm not much of a Jake/Emily fan.

Secondly, I was just aghast that Becca would practically abandon Jacob the way she did.  I liked getting the backstory on how Jacob came to be with Jake, as well as seeing how this transformed Jake's life.  I liked that you didn't idealize the transition, that you made it clear that it was difficult.  But I've always thought that anything worth having is worth working for. 

Great job!