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Reviewer: SandraDee Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2008 5:35:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I literally have tears in my eyes after reading this, Penny Lane!  What a poignant story.  I think I went through a whole myriad of emotions while reading this.  The palpable absence of Bonnie on this special day for Mimi and Stanley had my heart breaking for them.  Everything from Mimi bringing a bouquet for Bonnie to Stanley staying back and signing to her just put a lump in my throat! But then there were the little touches in this story that brought a smile to my face.  For example, Sean offering to walk Mimi down the aisle and the dresses on loan from Emily.  Despite the sadness, I wasn't left feeling bereft.  Instead, I felt the hope that Mimi and Stanley have, their determination, and their love for each other and Bonnie.

Beautiful story!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Sandra!

This story was really my reaction to Oversight. I thought it was so sad, and such a terrible thing to happen to this little family. I wondered what it would take for them to find hope again and I thought it would be by looking to each other. Thanks for reading!

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