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Reviewer: suziqb77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2009 7:49:12 PM Title: Part 1

Very good.  I would like to read this on a podcast as our fanfic section.  The podcast is called futuretraditions.com



Author's Response:

Thank you, suziqb77.  That is very flattering.  As the story is unfinished, you might want to wait until it is completed to make sure it is still something that you want to include in your podcast.

Reviewer: Marzee Doats Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2009 9:58:49 PM Title: Part 1

Well, I have to say I'm intrigued -- and that's saying something as I didn't exactly care for this episode (or Season 2). 

What I found most interesting (especially in light of the J/H tag you put on this story :-D ) was the interaction between Heather and Emily.  If I were Heather I'd be really ticked about my supposed friend questioning my loyalty, especially since we really didn't see Emily trying to be Heather's friend during Season 2.  I think Emily really showed her true colors there -- and Heather should now feel free to follow through on that J/H tag without even a twinge of guilt.

Looking forward to what comes next, though the squeamish part of me hopes you don't leave Jake in the ASA's hands too long...

Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review, Marzee Doats.  I am glad I could intrigue you with a story based on an episode you didn't even like. :D 

I was hoping to fill in some of the blanks of season 2, and I thought that the Heather/Emily friendship, or lack thereof, was a definite glaring blank.  These two may as well have been strangers.  Did they even exchange a word?  That was the impetus for that development in the story. 

Thank you again for your comment, and I do apologize for taking so long to thank you.  I am not computer savvy, and I didn't know how to use the author response function at first.

Avery

Reviewer: Penny Lane Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2009 2:01:14 AM Title: Part 1

Interesting take on things!

I really like how you paint a vivid picture with your words. I feel as though I'm experiencing the events as they happen.

I will be interested to see where you go with this next, and how it will differ from the version of Sedition as we know. I found Chris Sullivan's appearance here intriguing. I was left wondering about Jake's past as he copes with his present, and I really liked how you chose to portray this moment where time is not really as linear or concrete as we usually know it to be. I am curious as to whether Chris will continue to exert an opinion or influence on things, and if Jake will revisit any other moments or voices from his life.

Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

I finally learned how to respond to reviews!  Thank you for the review, Penny Lane.  I apologize for not getting the response function figured out sooner.

Chris will continue to be an influence on the story as something of a spectral narrator.  Jake will revisit other events from his life and have Chris' commentary in the process.

Thank you again for reading and commenting.

Avery

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