Reviews For Cold Comfort
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Reviewer: Marzee Doats Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2009 11:52:57 PM Title: Cold Comfort

Ah!  I love how much feeling and hope you're able to pack into so few words.  This is one of those pieces I come back to time and again.  Lovely!

Reviewer: SandraDee Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2009 12:10:18 AM Title: Cold Comfort

Dponice, this was really good!  I like how you took a scene that is so familiar to us but gave it your own flare.

Some of my favorite parts are as follows:

Jake wanting to kiss her soundly.
Jake's desire to put a DO NOT TOUCH sign on Heather to ward off any advances from Ted.
His dream of what could be between them

Very nice!

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