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Reviewer: SandraDee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2010 12:51:15 PM Title: The Haunting of Eric Green

This was an interesting chapter.  Eric, who is generally considered a voice of reason to some of the more exciteable characters around him, seeking out others' thoughts on the existence of ghosts...priceless.

I thought you did a really nice job capturing character voices.  Each reacted/said much like I would've thought based on what we've known of them. Yet their reactions were not passe or predictable. Not sure if I just made much sense there. LOL.

 Stanley's reaction was, by far, my favorite though:

"Ghosts?" asked Stanley. "The kind that slime people and leave a trail of ectoplasm?"

So funny! 

Of course, Eric's situation is no laughing matter, though I certainly do enjoy dramatic irony.

Reviewer: Marzee Doats Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2009 7:46:06 PM Title: The Haunting of Eric Green

Poor Eric.  Truly haunted by one heck of a 'ghost' but disbelieved by everyone.  And what a set up for what's to come!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I agree, poor Eric. Though, being the believer in a ghost story, at least we know there'll be a big shift in who believes what at some point.

 

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