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Reviewer: AveryB Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2009 3:27:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

Another great chapter!  I was glad to see Jake let Emily have it for concealing the letter. 

As I read Heather's letter, it was almost as though I could hear her voice in my head.  You really did a good job portraying her character.  I also liked getting the brief explanation of how Heather meant more to Jake than he'd previously let on and that the moments of safety he had involved her. 

With Heather taking another page from Jake's book, she's likely to find herself in trouble.  Someone must know about her.  Otherwise, why put the papers under her pillow.  Additionally, that person must not be one of Constantino's cronies (though I am worried for Heather on this account). 

Skyrose, I really like how you're pulling these different pieces together. 

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