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Reviewer: Marzee Doats Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2009 11:59:37 PM Title: Chapter 13A

Ah, lucky, lucky chapter thirteen. ;-)  I'm sure Heather and Jake agree with me, and I'm so glad you posted this treat for us, Skyrose, and on your one year, one day Greens of Jericho anniversary, too. :-)

This was an absolutely lovely "morning after" for our favorite couple.  I'm glad, too, that you went to the birth control discussion.  This is a topic that concerns/bothers me since we really didn't hear anything about it on the show.  But given the ways of the new world order it is a real issue, and one that our characters would need to consider along with others.  So that satisfied my practical side... and Jake's and Heather's choice to consciously (and together as a couple) accept whatever the future had in store for them satisfied my sentimental side.

Sam and his picture were a hoot!  I totally crack up at this line every time I read it:

"No, me and my mom. She plays a lot better than my dad." Sam pointed to the third figure, "See, that's my dad on the porch. He's watching us play. Didn't you recognize them?" he said with a frown.

The joys of children's drawings!  :-D

Can't wait to see what happens next.... and just how late Jake and Heather are to their appointment with Hawkins and Chavez!

Reviewer: Penny Lane Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2009 7:36:47 PM Title: Chapter 13A

Great chapter, Skyrose!

I liked the way you captured this moment in Jake and Heather's relationship, in the aftermath of their first night together, this important step for them. You write a sweet, somewhat idealistic (in a good way!) dynamic between these two very different characters, as they begin to share a life.  

I also really liked the scene you gave us back in Jericho. I loved seeing the community (well, some of our favourite community members) and how they are coping while our heros are in Cheyenne. I liked the details, like Sam's drawings, Stanley and Mimi's kitchen-rearranging inside joke, Allison finally getting to be a teenager as she makes friends and finds a place in the community, and I chuckled over Darcy's knowing something that Gail is not two steps ahead of, for once.

I look forward to the next part!

Reviewer: SandraDee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2009 8:35:53 PM Title: Chapter 13A

So happy to see this posted, Skyrose! 

What a nice morning Jake and Heather are having together. ;)  I would say it's sweet that they can't get enough of each other, but maybe sultry is more like it.   I thought the conversation they had about having children was really well written.  The way they're going, that is something that they may deal with sooner rather than later.  Heather strikes me as a fairly traditional kind of gal, so I'm sure she'd like to be settled into married life before that happens.  Yet when coupled with the fact that everything is more complicated since the bombs (just look at what happened to poor April), no wonder there was some trepidation.  I love the way they trust in their relationship with each other, though.  And with the way they're going, I wonder if Hawkins and Chavez will be waiting for a long time before Jake and Heather make it for the phone call Hawkins arranged...

I know I've said it before, but I like the friendship between Gail and Darcy.  It's good to see that they have each other for a support system.  And Sam, in all his eagerness, was absolutely cracking me up.

As always, I'm looking forward to more!

 

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