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Reviewer: AveryB Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2009 3:35:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh crap!  Heather has more trouble than she realizes!  Valente and Goetz know who she is and are plotting to use Constantino to kill her? 

It's good that Jake has someone (Hawkins) that he can rely on for help.  I'm also glad that Jake isn't going to let Heather languish in Cheyenne.

And thank you for cutting that noose off of Jake's neck.  I'm glad to see him have some resolution to his relationship with Emily. 

Off for more reading!

Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2008 10:21:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

OH! wow! This is a wonderful story.

Favorite part is...

(The truth of the dream's meaning in his subconscious jolted Jake awake. It took another minute for the dream's message to seep into his conscious being.

Once awake, Jake couldn't go back to sleep. His mind was occupied with thoughts of his relationship with Emily. His heart, on the other hand, was full of feelings for Heather.

Jake knew he had to deal with the thoughts in his mind before turning attention to the feelings in his heart.

Tonight, he finally admitted that his relationship with Emily was over. He wasn't able to give her what she wanted, what she seemed to need. She wanted the old Jake back . . . she wanted the same relationship they had before Chris died. She was living in the past while he was looking towards the future. )

Yes, Jake, look to the future! Yipee.

Headed to read more.

Sid




Author's Response:

I'm glad that you're enjoying my story! I really enjoy getting into the character's mind, trying to figure out how they would deal with certain situations. I think that while Jake realized he had feelings for Heather, he couldn't pursue them until he ended his realtionship with Emily. I also think that he realized that with Emily, he'd always being living in the past -being someone he no longer was - and that he needed to look toward the future. Thanks for the review.

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