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Reviewer: AveryB Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2009 3:46:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

Another very satisfying chapter, Skyrose! 

Uh oh on two accounts.

1) It looks as if Jake might have some competition for Heather!  I was so surprised (but also excited) to see the character of Chavez.  I enjoyed the backstory you gave him.  Or the one he gave Heather, I should say, which may or may not be the whole truth.  The fact that she's kept her distance from everyone else but is willing to befriend him is very telling, even if she is still thinking of Jake.

2) Constatino is like a rabid dog.  Wait, he's worse because he is fired up for a target.  It sounds as though Eric might also have something to worry about in the form of Goetz. 

I'm loving this!

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