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Reviewer: AveryB Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2009 3:44:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

I like the background you give on Tomarchio and Sheridan.   It’s good to know that not everyone in the Cheyenne government is corrupt.  I am left to wonder if he eventually be an ally to Hawkins.


Uh oh.  So government representatives are seeing to it that people are not rebuilding factories?  Is this so citizens will be more dependent upon the Cheyenne government?  I smell a skunk.  Heather does, too.  I’m a little worried about her meeting with Valente, considering that he seems very aware of who she is already. 


I also liked how you brought together Hawkins, Chavez, and Green.  It’s good to see Jake being protective of Heather.  And what a cliffhanger!  Luckily for me, there are more chapters posted.  Off to read more!

Reviewer: Obsidianagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2008 10:48:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

Yes! Yes! Yes, this is one very compelling story.

Thanks for sharing.

Sid



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're still enjoying my story! Thanks for the review.

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