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Reviewer: AveryB Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 11:53:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

I kept meaning to come back to this story and read more, but real life got busy. Glad I saw that you updated. I have some catching up to do.

Trouble's brewing! I like how you have different storylines intersecting. That's not easy to do.

Constantino is looking for Heather. Not good. Lucky for her, she has Jake. Speaking of Jake, I'm glad he's come to his senses and realized what she means to him.

The conversation between Hawkins and Chavez about Heather was funny. Hawkins is right. Chavez doesn't stand a chance. I can't help but like Chavez, though. Maybe there will be another nice woman in the story for him somewhere.

Just please don't let it be Tara. Yuck.

Valente, double-yuck. Heather's a brave girl to go into that lion's den.

Thanks for the good bedtime story, Skyrose.

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