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Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2013 7:37:33 PM Title: Part 6A

I'm back! Finally I found some time, and now I will try to catch up and - of course - leave reviews... ;)

Nice how you put the convo between Jake and Mitch into your story! Loved that little encounter... ;)

Ohhh - red roses from Jake! Very romantic! And don't let Em get you, Heather! She's just jealous...

Ahhh - bleeep... nevertheless Em found a way to poison everything... :(

Nice how you worked Heather in at the barn! Very thrilling the moment Jake tried to get her on the radio!

And I loved the sweet moment between Heather and Johnston, when he needed help but would have been to proud to take it - and Heather turned the tables and stated, that she was the one needing help!

Good chapter, I hope soon I can read more!

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