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Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:49:08 AM Title: Part 4A

Hah - you even had the shower scene in, despite of Heather already being Jake's wife! Love that! :)

 

And their first date and kiss(es) was brilliant! :)



Author's Response:

Well, I couldn't leave out the shower scene, now could I??

Glad you enjoyed my version of their first date and kiss! :-)

Reviewer: merryann Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 12:17:14 AM Title: Part 4A

"You're gonna call me that for the next seven months, aren't you?" Heather asked, groaning.

"You better believe it," Stanley grinned.

LOL!!

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