Penname: Shadowflame [Contact] Real name: Anja
Member Since: 27 Nov 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm Anja, a mother of two sons and I live in Germany.


I'm a big Fan of Jericho and Prison Break, but I also like Stargate, The Walking Dead, Criminal Minds, Bones, CSI and so much more... :)


Of course I love movies too - Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter, Narnia, etc.


As for FanFiction... this is just like a wonderful playground, there are so many possibilities!!!!


I'm obsessed reading FanFics... they add so much to the shows and movies that I love... flesh to the bone... make the beloved characters so much more alive and vivid...


To make it short: I have the faint hope that maybe I can spread this favour... that maybe the things I have in my heart and head may do that little magic for other people too...


But well... we will see... :)


Oh... and I have to mention - I'm no native english speaker, so my writing may be a bit odd... but I have wonderful support from my Beta Nikki in GB and from 2merryann from the USA and now BBC Addict has joined this lovely group - thanks so much, girls, without the help of you I wouldn't dare to publish anything!!!! *sends a lot of hugs & kisses*


Hugs from Germany


Shadowflame :)


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Different Circumstances, Part 10 by Marzee Doats Rated: T (Contains Content Not Suitable for Children) [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

What if circumstances were different, and Jake and Heather had met long before the school bus? An alternate version of Jericho in which Jake and Heather are married and expecting. A re-telling of the Jericho episode Red Flag.


Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather, Holidays > Thanksgiving
Characters: April Green, Bill, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Jimmy Taylor, Johnston Green, Kenchy Dhuwalia, Robert Hawkins, Stanley Richmond
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.10 - Red Flag
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Series: Different Circumstances
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54609 Read Count: 195294
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2008 Updated: 26 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Part 10C

Love the girl talk zone! ;)

And now I feel sorry for Em... o.O

Jake was quite harsh with her...

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Part 10D

So Jake figured out that April is pregnant....

And - I really had to laugh at the thought that back in the old days before the bombs Heather roughed up Eric by accident when they had the football match! Ouch!

Oh no! Jeeez, you kill me - stopp interrupting Jake and Heather!!!!!

And I really feel sorry for April AND for Eric... T_T

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Part 10E

very nice Thanksgiving with some very nice, touching moments!

Different Circumstances, Part 11 by Marzee Doats Rated: T (Contains Content Not Suitable for Children) [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

What if circumstances were different, and Jake and Heather had met long before the school bus? An alternate version of Jericho in which Jake and Heather are married and expecting. A re-telling of the Jericho episodes Vox Populi and The Day Before.


Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather
Characters: April Green, Bill, Dale Turner, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Johnston Green, Jonah Prowse, Mary Bailey, Roger Hammond
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.11 - Vox Populi, 1.12 - The Day Before
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Series: Different Circumstances
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62150 Read Count: 206744
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2008 Updated: 26 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Part 11A

You are writing again and the next chapter is close to be posted??? And I and my reviews were helping????

Yeeehah! Those are good news!!!!! *beams*

Well, if my reviews keep you going you can have a lot more of them!

And I know what you mean with life interfering more and more... have not written one word for a year now... *sigh*

Just no time to get my head free... :(

Well, that said I can't wait to read more from our favorite couple! :)

Have to go to work soon, but this Part A of the chapter I will read, now! ;)

huh... Emily...

You know, I didn't like her in the beginning of the show... but she was tough and safed Bonnie! Then she was so mean to Jake in the bunker... then it seemed she was a good friend for Heather, and I started really liking her!

She gave Heather kind of permission to try it with Jake... and even tried to give her the well-earned kudos for making the ice...

And then, suddenly, she started hitting on Jake, again!

I was like: Arrrgh! What is she doing????? She's betraying Heather's friendship!!! Did really my head in, then! *scowls*

And you picture that perfectly here... Ok, Em and Heather are no friends in DC... But Em seems to have turned round from being hurt (that Jake didn't ditch Heather somewhere in the past, that their bonding is working, that a baby is on the way) and angry at the couple to try to hit on Jake, again!

Jeeeez... so wanna smack her head despite of feeling somehow sorry for her...

Love it that you wake those controversal feelings in me! :)

 

Awwww! I knew he would confess that he loves her! So sweet! But I hate that this special moment was interrupted! Grmpf!

And is it wrong that I do wanna have one of those muffins right now? ;)

 

I like that Jeff and Michael are helping Jake getting the supplies...

 

Good chapter! :) *hugs*

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Part 11B

I really like the friendship between Heather and April which you are building up!

So good both found something to laugh at... ;)

 

""

"And what does she do?"

Shaking his head, Jake had waited until he had passed a big rig to answer. "She teaches third grade."

"So, she knows how to handle you," Gretchen had laughed. "That's good.""

--> Hahaha, that made me laugh so much... that's so true! *wipes eyes* ;)

Jake and Heather are sooooooooooooooo sweet together!

 

And yeah, I think you are right: Kenchy likes Emily... ;)

 

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Part 11C

Wow, you really put many thoughts in that election process, respect!

I still hate it that Gray won... *scowls*

But I love the Lisinskis, what a caring and loving and jolly clan they are! :)

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Part 11D

You know, I always thought the scene between Jake and Gray, with Gray having the gun trained at Jonah's head was an unbelievable powerful one... I was at the edge of my seat, then!

And you brought me there again, despite of knowing what would have happen...

Well done! :)

I always thought that was really the first time Johnston could see Jake as Jake truly is, and accept that Jake is a good man and can handle bad situations... an absolut goosebump moment!

Awwww… The talk between Heather and her father was heartwarming! Love the “little hands” story… :)

And I so can see Em and Jonah get into a fight like this...

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Part 11E

Ah, the refugees arrived...

Love it that you mention that no one called Gray... *laughs*

Oh-oh... and now Heather and Jake are having a fight over that stupid party... *sigh* :(

Different Circumstances, Part 12 by Marzee Doats Rated: T (Contains Content Not Suitable for Children) [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

What if circumstances were different, and Jake and Heather had met long before the school bus? An alternate version of Jericho in which Jake and Heather are married and expecting. A re-telling of the Jericho episode Black Jack.


Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather, Holidays > Christmas
Characters: April Green, Bill, Bonnie Richmond, Dale Turner, Emily Sullivan, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Jimmy Taylor, Johnston Green, Roger Hammond, Russell, Skylar Stevens, Stanley Richmond, Ted Lewis
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.13 - Black Jack
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Series: Different Circumstances
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66226 Read Count: 256211
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2008 Updated: 23 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Part 12A

Oh my... that story with the baby... that's so horrible... :(

But that is what I really think would / could happen... *sigh* *hangs head*

"But now, it sounds like he's pretty much reverted to ogre Jake, happily biting off the head of anyone who makes the unforgiveable mistake of saying hello."

*laughs at that* Oh yeah, I bet this would be his reaction!

""But you do know that you can un-break up, right?"" Awwwwww, that's so sweet to name it like that... ;)

" "What those Green boys do to us. I think I can officially welcome you to the 'It Ain't Easy Bein' Green' club."

LOL, oh yeah... ;)

Oh my... is Emily serious this time? But I really can't see her getting friendly with Heather in this one... *shakes head*

"Did you ask Mom?" Jake inquired finally.

"Son," Johnston replied, a hint of a drawl once again coloring his tone, "I'm fifty-nine years old. I was mayor of this town since the Carter administration. I'm a retired U.S. Army Ranger and a combat veteran. Of course I asked your mother."

"Okay," Jake agreed, not quite able to repress a knowing smirk. "I guess you're goin'."

LOL - I so LOVE this little conversation... it is one of my favorite scenes in Jericho! :)

 

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Part 12B

LOL, that talk about Star Wars was hilarious! Loved it! :)

I'm - of course *g* - so glad that they made up...

Still strange that Heather will not be with them in Black Jack, but for the benefit of your wonderful story... and it makes - of course - sense... ;)

"I love you," he murmured a beat later. "And you," he added, his hands splayed across Heather's abdomen and the swell of their baby nestled within her. Jake kissed her then, his hands coming up to cup her face. The kiss started off slowly, lazily, but then grew more urgent. Jake dropped his hands, wrapping his arms around her and pulling her close. Their kiss deepened as they both poured all of their love, all of their affection, all of their trust, and also, all of their fear into one another.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... *sniffs silently, brushing a tear away*

:)

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Part 12C

Again: a very sweet convo between Heather and Gail - and I so can see this one (sort of) happen! :)

LOL - E.J.'s "Vice and Virtue Squad" - that's so brilliant! Love it! :)

Mindy! The waitress! Wow, what a surprise!

That seemed to be a helluva kiss on that porch, I swear! ;)

I like that you put Mindy in that New Bern part of the story - and put her with Ted! Very good idea!

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Part 12D

"Better them than us." You know, when I first watched the show I so could have smacked Gray for saying that! Little did I know how it would turn out in the end, what bad would happen because Jericho was able to get rid of Ravenwood... :(

That sentence still makes me shiver...

The whole "more than one" president thing made my hairs stand again... *goosebumps* - like it did, when I saw the ep... it is just horrible that above all of that Sh** they have to realize that a Civil War is looming - just because there are more than one who demand the power... :(

Jake is just cute, I loved all the little stories of stealing at Gracie's and how he tried to be grumpy with Eric and April.... *laughs*

Must have been a great show! And wow… there are so many meanings for the colours of roses… *snickers*

Black Jack is evil… I personally still think they just touched the top of all the rotting things going on there…:(

 

 

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Part 12E

Wow, interesting... I'm really intrigued how your story will work out for New Bern! I have to say the thing with the Warehouse and Mindy sounds actually like a good system, and Constantino helping that girl with the baby... o.O

Seems to be a nicer Contantino, at least for now... well, I guess we will have to wait and see what the future will bring, and if Constantino seeks revenge for Ravenwood and is lured by the goods he thinks Jericho still owns... ;)

Awwwwwwww…. Poor Jake is sick…. Heather for the rescue! :)

And as for Dale and  Skylar… I always found it cute that this pair found together! But I always was wondering why they were so left alone in all of this… maybe in your story they will get more advice? ;)

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Part 12F

LOL - looks like Heather really is a lipgloss-addict! ;)

Ah, and that is how Baron came into their lives... ;)

Wow... just think of how Eric got April the house as a gift! Jeeez!

Time for a bit lovin in post-nuke-USA... goooood!

Different Circumstances, Part 13 by Marzee Doats Rated: T (Contains Content Not Suitable for Children) [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

What if circumstances were different, and Jake and Heather had met long before the school bus?  An alternate version of Jericho in which Jake and Heather are married and expecting.  A re-telling of the Jericho episode Heart of Winter.

 

 


Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather
Characters: April Green, Eric Green, Gail Green, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Johnston Green, Mimi Clark, Stanley Richmond
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.14 - Heart of Winter
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Series: Different Circumstances
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47091 Read Count: 202385
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2009 Updated: 14 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Part 13A

Aaargh - I had a nice and long review in place - and then my computer died on me... :(

I hope I can get it all together again... *grmpf*

Ok, first: "Heart of Winter" is one of my favorite eps!!!! Can't wait to see what you will do with it!

 

It's horrible to see them all starve... :( I mean... you get a glimpse at that in the show, but not deep enough... your story goes so much deeper and you've done a good work... It feels so real reading all those little details the show had no time to bring closer... *shivers*

And it is so... so shocking especially with your permanent flashbacks to five years before the bombs... it is like... black and white, if you know what I want to say? That makes it even harder... and more "real"... just to think at all of those people in the USA who in an instant were forced to fight for their lives... to be all in a sudden faced with third-world-problems, things they could have just ignored before, because it was on the other side of the world... and now they have to live with it, no, that's not enough... they have to realize its not a bad dream, that they really are in this mess, that - if they want to survive - thay have to fight for all and everything...

When the find that trail of the fleeing people... that was really a moment to feel like getting a slap... a harsh reminder, a short glimpse out of the relatively "safe" bubble of Jericho into the real "new" world... quite shocking... *shudders*

""Besides, while he felt bad for these desperate people, Jake couldn't help but feel that if it was a question of his own survival - his family's survival - versus theirs, then he would choose his family.""

That was heartbreaking moment... having to realize that the time will come when you have to chose... that the luxury to help everyone - hell, that the luxury to chose itself!!! - has been taken from you... that you can be happy when you will not lose a member of family, when you will come out of this mess by the skin of your teeth... that realization is just devastating... :(

 

"""You know what we should do," he sighed, "We should just get married.""" - well... YESSSSS!!!!! But not like this! I hoped he would be a bit more creative when he proposed for Heather! *giggles*

 

But I'm sure he will make it right... ;)

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Part 13B

Ohhhh... I so hate this other truck! Despite knowing that there are presumably people in there who also are desperate for food an other essentials... I hate them!!!!!!

 

"""Stop," he commanded gently, moving to stand in front of her.  Jake reached for Heather's hand, extracting the puppy's lead and dropping it on the floor so he could lace their fingers together.  "I haven't had a shower in more like ... twenty hours," he decided, raising her hand to his mouth so he could press a kiss to her knuckles.  "Plus, I haven't brushed my teeth, either," he admitted with an exaggerated grimace that pulled another, not entirely serene giggle from Heather.  "And we both have slight cases of bed head," Jake continued, wrapping a lock of her hair around the index finger of his free hand.  "So basically - like your niece says - we match."""

So sweet!!! That made me squeal whilst reading! :)

And the proposal at the water tower was sweet, too! :)

 

Jeeez... the situation at the truck is so dire... everything's gone, it's freezing, Jake stuck, Stanley injured... *sighs*

 

Oh my.... :(

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Part 13C

God... it hurts so much to read that... you describe it so well... *sniffs*

Do you know that - when I started watching Jericho (the first time) - I was not so much impressed (have to admit, I worked alongside watching it, so I was watching with only a half eye so to speak)... then the ep came when Heather threw herself at Jake and kissed him like... like it would be the last thing she would ever do... I was like WHOAHHHH! o.O

From that moment on I stopped working whilst watching... but really hooked got me "Heart of Winter"... that was when I fell for Jake... *blushes*

Well, I have to admit, it looks like I can't resist a beaten up (and almost dying) man in a Hoodie... *sighs*

That said... you wrote it really well! Made my heart go out for him for the umpteenth time, now... *sniffs*

 

And again I loved the part of their past... :)

Can't wait for Jake to meet Heather's father and brothers!!!! :)

 

Gosh... its almost midnight now... but I think I will at least start reading the next part... *runs off* :)

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Part 13D

Yeah... I saw it like you described it... The story with the girl would have been Jake's last confession before he finally gave into the cold and his injuries... *shudders*

That special scene between Jake and his father... makes me cry... *sniffs*

 

And the scene in the past was so sunny and full of love and laughter, so... full of ease... the contrast to the future could hardly be starker... *shudders*

Well done!

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Part 13E

*sigh* Poor Jake... T_T

For Heather it must have been hell to be stuck at the clinic, damned to wait for them to come back...

So cute from Stanley to try to keep her sane, telling those old stories...

Again the flashback was wonderful! So they finally got together... *sigh*

Was 'bout time!!!!! ;)

And Awwwwwww.... that last scene between Jake and Johnston... *sniffs* It broke my heart... :(

Different Circumstances, Part 14 by Marzee Doats Rated: T (Contains Content Not Suitable for Children) [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

What if circumstances were different, and Jake and Heather had met long before the school bus?  An alternate version of Jericho in which Jake and Heather are married and expecting.  A re-telling of the Jericho episode Semper Fidelis.


Categories: Green Family, Jake/Heather
Characters: April Green, Bonnie Richmond, Eric Green, Gail Green, Gray Anderson, Heather Lisinski, Jake Green, Johnston Green, Maggie Mullin, Mimi Clark, Roger Hammond, Stanley Richmond
Episode/Spoilers For: 1.15 - Semper Fidelis
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Series: Different Circumstances
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87263 Read Count: 253014
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2009 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Part 14A

Ha, I love it that the towns council still stands up against Gray... *snickers* ;)

And the Marines... *sigh*

I was really devastated after that ep... had my hopes flying high with them...

Ohhh - the scene in the plane was sweet!

And I wonder what Heathers brothers have planned for Jake... *snickers*

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Part 14B

Awwww... Stanley... you really gave me goosebumps and made me cry reading how his parents died and how the Greens were there for him... *sniffs*

Maggie... I really was annoyed when Jake at the show responded to her, somehow connected to her... but I like her... ;)

Loved the scenes with Jake and Heather's sisters-in-law, especially the "withhold something if need to" and Jake with Hannah on his lap!

You made me really squeal with that one:

"Oh, take it," Leslie advised.  She hadn't said anything for awhile, but she'd been following the conversation closely all the same.  "For all of us stuck back here in Buffalo who will just have to make do with memories of our 'My Little Pony' collections," she joked.

My little Pony!!!! *laughs at that*

You can't know it... but I'm actually a collector of those ones... have more than 700 of them here... *snickers*

And in another fan base for another great show I had been known as "the german Pony Doctor" because I can restore those old lovely ponies, give 'em new hair and eyes and so on... *laughs*

Now you connected my beloved Ponies with Jericho, that's so fab!!!! *jumps up and down* :)

And I'm glad that Jake finally opened up to Heather... he needs to tell her, about that attack... and about so much more...

Loved it, good chapter! :)

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Part 14C

I like the idea of placing Michael instead of Jake with Maggie! And Michael seems smitten... poor guy will not like what he will learn, soon... :(

 

And Heather's family is just awesome... *laughs*

I love being able to stick my beak into those family moments! :)

And it looks like that Jake is at least winning Joe over... the girls he has already on his side... now we need to see what Heather's brothers have to say! ;)

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Part 14D

Hm... first I want to say some things which pricked me when they all sat down and ate what little they had left with the marines... Being happy about the news is one thing... but as a "common", half-starved citizen of Jericho I would have put on a full rebellion when I had realized that the "High Society" of Jericho was dining with the Marines!!!!

And as for the firework... Gosh... that must have been seen from everywhere in the plains! For each starving person on the treck to south, for each road gang that should have been a signal that there must be a place out there which still has enough live and energy (and food and enough of everything???) to make a firework!!!! Its like sitting in a fishbowl and waving with all you can reach to show each person out there where Jericho is!

For this stupid idea alone I so would have liked to kill Gray...

So, but now back to your story!

I like rice in combination with potatoes... ;)

 

*g* This one I like:

""And I'd avoid doing that," Deborah said a good ten or fifteen seconds later.  "That lost-in-your-eyes, no-one-else-in-the-world thing," she added, waving her hand widely in the couple's direction, not that it appeared to register with either of them.  "It's really, really hard not to notice."  She paused a moment.  "Really, the type of thing that'll send them all over the edge...."""

 

Ahhh... Maggie... *sigh* ... and poor Michael... he really has no luck with women... :(

 

Can't wait to read more!

o.O No, wait... I reached the end, didn't I????? Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!

 

*gets a panic attack* o.O

 

Need more!!!!! Pretty pretty please? ;)

 




Author's Response:

Shadowflame,

First, thank you so much for reading my the whole thing (so far) and leaving me such lovely feedback.  It really was a signifcant reason I went back to writing.  (Having my parents recover from their health problems and things easing up at work helped too.)  But I truly appreciate that there's at least one person out there who wants to know what happens next.

For anyone else who's been waiting nearly 2 years for the next part, I can only apologize and thank you for hanging in and checking back every once in awhile.  The next part is coming soon, I promise.  :-)

I hope you can bear with me, there's more Michael/Maggie coming... I was glad to have someone to substitute in there for Jake, and Mikey seemed like a really good fit.  I always liked Maggie (despite Jake's interest in her ;-) ) and Michael/Maggie has grown on me, so look for more.

Lastly, I have to agree with you, Shadowflame.... what were they thinking when they set those fireworks off?  And, also it was pretty mean to throw a dinner and invite almost no one to it aside from the marines.  My dear friend and sometime collaborator has made the common, every day citizen of Jericho argument to me more than once, and it is very compelling.  But, these are also the people -- some of them anyway -- who voted for Gray.  What were they thinking?

Thanks again for all the reviews.  They are muchly appreciated and the best fodder for a fanficcer like me. :-)

 

Marzee

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Part 14E

*squeals* Yay!!!!!! :)

Since I saw yesterday that you have updated I couldn't wait to find time to read!!!!

Now, here I am and thanks so much for the special shout out - I feel so honoured!

Hopefuly your "Come back" will give me that much needed inspiration to come to my feet and do something, too... like at least posting finally my little stuff here even if my muse will not return for something new... *coughs*

 

Ok, now, I stop talking and start reading!!!! :)

 

"Ignoring what was going on around her, Maggie leaned over Michael, shaking him.  “Mike, c’mon, Mike.  Please wake up,” she begged quietly.
“You could always try kissin’ him.”  Maggie looked up and glared at Jake as he sauntered toward them, “I’m pretty sure he’d like that.”  Stopping at Michael’s feet, he tapped the bottom of his brother-in-law’s shoe with the toe of his own boot.  “Hey, c’mon, sleeping beauty, time to get up.”"

--> Yes Jake, that would be a good idea, Mike really would love it, I'm sure!!!! *snickers*

 

""Michael heaved a sigh, muttering, “Guess we all can’t have a truck fall on us.”

“That’s Jake for you, Mike,” Eric said, joining the other three.  “Always wins in the injury department,” he complained, offering Michael a hand.  The younger man hesitated a second – no doubt weighing his loyalty to April against accepting his assistance, Eric thought – but then he took it, letting Eric help him to his feet.

“Pretty much,” Jake agreed, “Except for that time Heather got you in the nose playing football.  You talked like Elmer Fudd for a week.”""

--> Hahaha, that really made me laugh... and yeah... not easy to beat Jake with the injuries, I swear! ;)

 

""Gray let out a humorless bark of laughter.  "Well, you know, like I used to tell Stevens, you know the deal's done when everybody feels a little bit screwed."""

--> Well, I don't like the deal!!!! Especially not after giving a firework AND feeding the little the town had left only to the fake Marines and the upper class! And that sentence sounds so like Gray... you nailed him here! At least like he was in the beginning... I always started to like Gray in the end, I think he came around... but in the beginning... shame on you! *scowls*

 

--> Hahahaha, of course Jake would have loved to play Twister with Heather... *wiggles eyebrows and laughs*

 

""Although her brothers were at least fifteen seconds behind Heather, they arrived in the living room – along with their father – in plenty of time to get a good show.  With the three Lisinski wives following behind, there was nearly a pile-up in the arch the separated the living and dining rooms when Michael, John and Andrew came to a very sudden stop, gaping at their sister and her fiancé.

"Ew, Dad!" Michael protested, "Aren't you going to make this stop?""

--> *giggles* I so can see that!

 

"""You went to the bathroom on New Year's, and my Mom and April both took the opportunity to smack me and tell me in no uncertain terms that I was to drop it," he informed Heather, squeezing her hand.  "I'm supposed to let you enjoy being a bride."""

--> LOL, and that, too!!!!

Awwww... that's so cute that the proposal story and that Heather giggled so much finally won the Lisinski-Men over and it seems they will accept Jake! Only one Lisinski left now, right? ;)

 

"""C'mon, Tommy," Andrew admonished, turning a bratwurst. ""

--> Jeeez - really - you call it "Bratwurst" in the USA, too????? That's so german! Made me laugh so much!!! Cool! ;)

And it looks like Andrew steps a bit in for Jake?????

 

""He'd thought about it for a moment before pulling her close, wrapping his arms around her waist and kissing the tip of her nose.  "Deal," he'd sighed softly, offering her a lopsided grin.  "Long as you're there with me, having three kids probably won't kill me."""

--> so cute!!!!! :)

 

"""We're not having pizza, and I don't think you're gonna really like beer until they make it coffee flavored."""

--> ok, that sounds interesting, I think then I maybe could start liking a beer, too!

 

“”Jake pulled the door open and looked in at them.  "Hey.  We need our last marine so we can get this show on the road."

Maggie wouldn't look at Michael.  "That's my cue," she sighed.””

--> oh no…. really… despite I didn’t like Jake kissing her in the show I always liked Maggie… and I didn’t like that she had to leave town with the others… And now for sure I don’t like her going – she would be so nice for Mike!

 

“”  "But I do like you," she said attempting a smile and failing miserably.  "It wouldn't work, not after the story we told.  And not with story you're all plannin' to tell."””

--> yeah… how shall that work? *sigh*

 

Ohhhhh – another part will come up! Love it!!!! *beams*

Thanks so much for writing again… loved every word of it!!!!

And now you get a load of hugs & kisses from Germany… xxx ooo :)

 

 




Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing Shadowflame!  

 

"Ignoring what was going on around her, Maggie leaned over Michael, shaking him.  “Mike, c’mon, Mike.  Please wake up,” she begged quietly.


“You could always try kissin’ him.”  Maggie looked up and glared at Jake as he sauntered toward them, “I’m pretty sure he’d like that.”  Stopping at Michael’s feet, he tapped the bottom of his brother-in-law’s shoe with the toe of his own boot.  “Hey, c’mon, sleeping beauty, time to get up.”"

--> Yes Jake, that would be a good idea, Mike really would love it, I'm sure!!!! *snickers*

 

Jake knows Mikey very well. :-)  But he really is trying to help.

 

""Gray let out a humorless bark of laughter.  "Well, you know, like I used to tell Stevens, you know the deal's done when everybody feels a little bit screwed."""

--> Well, I don't like the deal!!!! Especially not after giving a firework AND feeding the little the town had left only to the fake Marines and the upper class! And that sentence sounds so like Gray... you nailed him here! At least like he was in the beginning... I always started to like Gray in the end, I think he came around... but in the beginning... shame on you! *scowls*

 

The deal is a bad one, but I wanted to give a plausible explanation for how we get to One Man's Terrorist a little bit down the road.  But yeah, Gray really needs to grow into his job, doesn't he?

 

Awwww... that's so cute that the proposal story and that Heather giggled so much finally won the Lisinski-Men over and it seems they will accept Jake! Only one Lisinski left now, right? ;)

The Lisinski brothers definitely are starting to come around.  They've never seen their sister like this… it's an eye-opening experience for them. :-) 

 

"""C'mon, Tommy," Andrew admonished, turning a bratwurst. ""

--> Jeeez - really - you call it "Bratwurst" in the USA, too????? That's so german! Made me laugh so much!!! Cool! ;)

And it looks like Andrew steps a bit in for Jake?????

 

Yes, we absolutely have bratwurst here in the U.S.  :-)  Additionally, in my backstory for Heather, her mother is 100% of German descent, so the Lisinski kids know their German food at the very least.  As for Andrew, yes I think he's willing to give Jake the benefit of the doubt…. But he better not mess up anywhere along the way!

 

--> oh no…. really… despite I didn’t like Jake kissing her in the show I always liked Maggie… and I didn’t like that she had to leave town with the others… And now for sure I don’t like her going – she would be so nice for Mike!

 

 

I had the same reaction to Maggie…. Stay away from Jake!  But I really think you're an interesting character.  So it was nice that I could reconcile that all by slipping Mikey into those scenes instead.  We will see Maggie again…. We'll just have to see if Mikey sees Maggie again. :-)

Reviewer: Shadowflame Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Part 14F

Hah! Found your new entry! *beams*

And the famous tank scene! Love it... :)

Ugggghhhhh - that bad smell... I almost could smell it... *feels somehow sick*

Poor guys who had to drive that tank!

As for the wedding papers - so cute how Jake told Heather that those papers are not important to him, that he will do everything gladly for her as long as it means he can marry her and be with her until they are 100 years old... or something like that... Awwww! :)

And as for the icecold shower... yuck!

Poor guy still has more ice than blood in his venes and you let him take an icecold shower! Tsk...

As ever, I loved your new chapter!

And you really need a 14G????? Wow! Can't wait to read it!

Thanks for writing! ;)




Author's Response:

Thanks, Shadowflame!

 

That tank was pretty gross, wasn't it?  I really did feel bad for doing that to the guys, but I had to figure that it was pretty well lived in by that point.  And, I just couldn't see a way around Jake taking a shower.

You summed up Jake's reaction to the wedding paperwork perfectly.  He'll sign whatever he has to sign in order to marry Heather.  And wouldn't that make any of us melt? :-)

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.  Much appreciated!